post-writing

Post-writing to dialogue essay: 

In my  essay I asked if our society it seems like we are blaming the film producers and music producers for the violence we have today. Throughout the essay I asked questions relating to the main question to get more information about the characters and their thoughts about violence. I try to give the characters personality alive throughout. At the end we conclude that the producers are not to blame for violence in the media, but they are one small percent of the problem. This dialogue essay is different sine it is not like the traditional essay we are used to such as the body of it, it still has an intro and conclusion but the body of it doesn’t have paragraphs its just the dialogue and more informal style of writing. For me I found this a little more difficult than a regular essay. I am not use to having such much liberty with my writing. I think I used agree, disagree and complicate with the “student” asking more question and trying to get more points brought up. Also with the Manson by bringing up his thought about violence and humans and contradicting the others.  My strength in my paper could be the style of it. I think the one area I could improve in my essay is maybe going more in depth on the evidence and the characters thoughts. In general in my entire essay, mostly in my dialogue and how I did transitioning to one of the authors to the next. As well if I did good in agree, disagree and complicate. I am not too sure about this essay it was my first time doing this type of essay and I don’t feel confident.