My essay was on video game violence. The main points of my essay where:
Are they bad for us?
Can they be good for us?
What would be next?
Violent video game should be an adult game not for kids.
How does dialoue differ from the more standard writing?
I think that dialogue writing is harder to write. It requires more imagination than the regular writing.
I used agree disagree ancocomplicate In my essay by having two different views While two agree a third disagree. There was an agreement. At the end where it was decided violent video games should only be played by people of age.
Best feedback I got was that it had a good flow.
I think my strength in the essay was that it laid out some good ideas.
My paper I think lacked in emotion.
I think my instructor could comment on better ways to show emotion. I feel that I do not see emotion.
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